The Dance of Dawn and Mist
3:47AM. My thermos clicks shut as the first pewter glow bleeds through cypress skeletons. The Caloosahatchee's breath rises in spectral veils, carrying the musk of wet moss and something metallic - maybe hope. I adjust my lucky fishing line for the thirteenth time, its familiar abrasion grounding me in the chill.
'Should've brought the green one,' I mutter, watching my soft plastic lure cut through mist curtains. The third cast snags on what feels like submerged memory. Then the 'plink' - distinct, deliberate - of a lure meeting branch. Except the branch pulled back.
Rod arching like a cathedral rib, I stumble over my own cooler. The fish surges toward oblivion, peeling backing line with a banshee wail. For six breathless minutes, we waltz between cypress knees, its silver flanks glittering through coffee-colored water. When the redfin finally surfaces, dawn breaks in its gills.
My release ritual complete, I notice the thermos still steaming on the cooler lid. The river swallows my laughter whole.















