When the River Whispered at Dawn
The pickup truck's door creaked like a disgruntled heron as I slipped into the predawn darkness. Somewhere beyond the cypress trees, the Kissimmee River was breathing its misty promise onto my face. I patted the worn spinnerbait in my breast pocket - the same one that failed me last week when a monster snapped my line.
By sunrise, the water had turned into liquid topaz. My third cast sent dragonflies skittering, the fluorocarbon line humming as it sliced through honey-colored light. 'Still think they're in the deep channel?' I muttered to the thermos of coffee slowly going cold. The answer came when my lure stopped mid-retrieve, as if caught on Atlantis itself.
What surfaced wasn't a fish but a gator's mossy smile. The subsequent scramble left me clutching one sandal and dignity. Yet as shadows stretched long, that persistent tug came - not at the rod, but in the memory of Dad's voice: 'The river speaks to those who stop yappin'.' The smallmouth that finally breached wore sunset colors, its fight echoing in the blisters forming on my thumb.
Driving home, I realized the real catch was the way water wrinkles differently when you're not chasing anything. The spinnerbait stayed dry in my pocket, now less a tool than a bookmark in today's story.















